Never ending darkness
Constantly surrounding me
Shaping in the likeness
Of life's bleak reality
But then your blinding light
It shone deep into my heart
Taking from me my sight
And then tearing me apart
Author notes
Just how I feel sometimes. You don't have to look at it too hard; just take in the words.
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welcome to all poetry
Hi Mysteriously Sincere
I have walked in these shoes myself
Excellent poem Please keep writing, reading and commenting
Barbara
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
I would say I think most people have felt like this at times, or something close to it. Good piece, especially for such a short one. It conveys your feelings clearly.
Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
Keep expressing through writing.
Storm
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