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Phoenix

Fitful night without a drop of sleep,
With tortured thoughts of life without you here.
Turning, tossing, burning while I weep.
Sullen eyes betray my twisted fear.

Dreams of nights without you in my world,
Have made my troubled stomach roil and heave.
My fragile state of mind is now unfurled,
By pain of frightful day that you may leave.

Imagining your arms surrounding me,
Has shown the greatest joy that you can bring.
The hope your love will never cease to be,
Is all my heart has left on which to cling.

I go to sleep now with you in my heart,
With hope that love of me is in yours too.
Too long our thoughts have spent their time apart,
But now I learn to love you purely new.

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A troubled time I thought I should write about.

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  • Lamia
    July 25, 2008

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    Good flow and rhyming. It's not easy to put forth emotion and rhyme at the same time. Very well done.


  • A m b r e a
    July 18, 2008
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    this is beautiful. It made me sigh. awww! greast word usage, and it flows perfectly!