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Rewind

Rewind. I am not here! Do you see, do you see their faces? Who are they?

I have built my sanctuary. Now I can't even hear myself. Unforgiving!

Again with the self righteousness. Do you see their faces?  Intolerant!

Isolated in paradise – I think not. Isolated with my thoughts and phenomenon.

Come ride the bike of my youth so I can show you happiness! Do you see their faces?

I have pedaled far. But lost is my consequence. The hill seems small now and not worth the effort.

My epitaph shall read "here Lies Man". How unoriginal.

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  • I see their faces too.
    I like your style

  • queen Greeters member
    July 19

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi johnstrat

    Sometimes our own thoughts make us feel so isolated and alone i can feel your anguish in this poem good work please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 19
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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    Defimitely sense some anger in your words, I hope with reason. But valid thoughts just the same. Wishing you the best in life. Well done with this piece.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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