Cottoned horizon
over azure ripples
mirroring pavilion above,
perfect canopy of hues
lovingly nestling
delight bubbles,
blossoming smiles
in my ebony seconds
as I glide down
in eternity dip.
Author notes
picture courtesy..photobucket!
A contest entry
- ....only for members of the group WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS................. by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
700 points, ended September 16, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Love this line - mirroring pavilion above,
some great words used in your poem and imagery
Thanks and good luck
Cind's
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or if it's not okay let me know - for credit it is from photobucket
Cind -
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Quite fine..very appealing....will have to work at it later though... Kitchen calls!
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great, look forward to it darl
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