Restoration of the flower
power stemming from one source,
rising up above us
her mission to reinforce.
Face upturned unto the moon,
an untold beauty of all age
reflected and burning bright,
the same in all walks of life, both off and on stage.
Restoration of the flower
beauty of all extremes,
rising up to save the world,
the savior of our dreams.
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Meh
A contest entry
- ....only for members of the group WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS................. by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
700 points, ended September 16, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ahh the saviour of our dreams.. what a nice thought! The picture is very pretty and I think you caught something just a little magical in it here! Well done hun!
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ohhh I so loved the pic darl..and I knew you would give it some great words...and you did
such spiritual under toning to it..dont know if u meant it or not..but I like feeling it
I really enjoyed this and think its well written
Thank you my niece
Good luck
Cind's
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Excellently penned, love the imagery here, great work. All the best in the contest
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Sweet Pea,
What a great job you did on this one! I love it! And sometimes, well yeah, I get the message, between you and dad....... geeeeeeeeze!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Mom
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"power stemming from one source"
'Stemming'...clever use of the word, and "one source" is intriguing.
"upturned unto the moon"
This sounds pretty.
"an untold beauty"
Well, now you're telling.
Good luck here! (:
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tell me if ya dont like it darl
can giv u another
http://mephotos.deviantart.com/art/Flower-Power-91436889
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