As the angels cried
my dreams breathed their last
touching the bottle of regret to my
trembling lips, I think of
all the little things once said,
that crushed the hope within me.
Soft as a butterfly I slowly drift
into the wind trying to escape
the shadow that calls your name
as the picture of our laughter shatters,
in every tear that falls
flooding my world with sorrow.
The choir sings, as heads bow
church doors open while my soul
tries to free itself from this pain
that your smile brings everytime
it collides with my future,
beauty dressed for a dramatic end
such an Angel as this bleeds upon your laughter.
Author notes
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My muse is officially dead! 
A contest entry
- ....only for members of the group WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS................. by CinfullyDelicious.
700 points, ended September 16, 14 entries
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Comments
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Wow, Sissy I love what you did with the pic, love the descriptions...soft as a butterfly...beauty dressed for a dramatic end
awesomeness
Thank you and good luck darl
Cind's
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oh yes, another wonderfully written poem. You write so well my friend. Your use of imagery is wonderful and I can just see the story as it unfolds with your words. Great job. And the pictures always add so much to the story too. You pick them well my friend.
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A haunting piece of sadness sissy! You've written this so beautifully that I could feel the emotion.. I guess we've all had someone make us feel like that!
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it took so long to write and it still didn't come out good enough .. but I'm glad you liked it
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Another strong write with beautiful imagery. A new bookmark for my page.
Nevadapoet
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Hurry up, I can't wait to read, that pic is kick-ass
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Lol.. yeah well, I did it.. it really sucks but I did it..lol.
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Fabulous pic... let me know when you've written for it sis!
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It took forever but I'm done. Lol.
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let me know if it's no good darl
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whats not good?
I don't get it..
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that works!!! thank you!!!
can I have another? or is it just one picture?
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