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Cadence In The Night



          cadence in the night
                we are a miracle to the poetry
        mounted and painted on the marble walls

                silent candor -
              stained like a last breath
                I finally feel at home
                stealing thunder beneath
            empty hands full of carbon...

Author notes

"Save one death for me." Cadence of her Last Breath

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  • ShadedRequiem
    July 22

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    This is a really great poem. It's very short, but you're able to convey emotion really well. It has great imagery too. Great job. Alyssa