sat eloquent in the noiseless dark
betrayed by the silence,
her heart sank into
the vindictive yearning
rendered a lullaby that only
the saints could sing
shunned beneath the fallacy
broken hearts rejected and
devoured by fate
confined under a black sun
the perfect vantage point
to convey all that is falling
sanity erased the breaching point
blood pouring into quantum fissures
poor torment maiden
the demolition of her bewitched enigma
comes shattering down
in the controversial couture execration of it all.
Author notes
picture and word bank
all words were used, but not in order
title used: Love Me Not
picture credit: http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n215/amy123_08/Gothic%20Beauties/dark_butterfly.gif
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Wowww. I'm in complete awe right now. I agree with XXVampireeyesXX 100%. The anger and pain just seeps from every line, and you used the wordbank, picture, & title so uniquely. Definitely loved this poem. I can't even pick out my favorite lines=) haha keep writing & thanks for entering ! Good luckkk♥
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wow! im in awe.. thisi s gretaly penned and greatly devoured by my eyes.. loved it.. the wording the imagery the everything.. you can actually taste the pain and the metaphors in this.. greatly done!
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