You made me cry, you hurt me so
And I wonder why I don't know
These tears are all for you
But you keep changing your mind
And I'm more confused I find
These tears keep falling too
I hear those same old lines
And I wonder why
The pain you made me feel
Each time you crossed the line
Now this is the last time
You made me cry, you hurt me so
And I wonder why I don't know
These tears are all for you
But you keep changing your mind
And I'm more confused I find
These tears keep falling too
I hear those same old lines
And I wonder why
The pain you made me feel
Each time you crossed the line
Now this is the last time
The last time
The very last time
Oh, no, Oh, no, Oh, no, Oh, no
Oh, no, Oh, no, Oh, no...
A contest entry
- Inspiration!! by xofightinirishx3.
800 points, ended July 26, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The repetition of "Oh, no," at the end of this works very well with the songlike quality of the rest of the piece. Some deep emotions in here, great write.
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i really liked this poem/song (i felt like it was a song too, was it?)
You made me cry, you hurt me so
And I wonder why I don't know
These tears are all for you
that was my favorite part, i totally know what you are saying
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