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Follow your heart


There is no rationality
No reason to stand
It knows what it wants
And will not rest
'Till all's won.

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  • Sorcha
    July 22, 2008

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    Even though the heart may only -think- it knows what it wants, it truly will never rest until it gets it. Your poem really hit the mark, Neirad. The heart is by far the most irrational thing that is both blessed and cursed with such boundless determination and hope.

  • Shadow Darkstar
    July 20, 2008
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    Short, sweet & to the point. It's cute.


  • bw43
    July 19, 2008

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    hmm... i disagree. sometimes the heart doesn't know what it wants. it THINKS it knows what it wants. but that's just my opinion.

    nice little poem. very cute.

    hope you're well.


  • Lotus-Mama
    July 18, 2008
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    The heart has a ressonating voice that we cannot ignore! Great write! Thanks for entering!!