they say in life
love is all you need
they say in life
money leads to greed
i say in life
love is too often said
and rarely ever meant
i say in life
greed never goes away
but money can be spent
no matter what they pray
no matter what i say
life is what you make of it
you
the filth,the gluttony,the hate,the despisement,the passion,the love,the greed,the want,the need,the insane,ripping,gutless,vengence,the fury,the anger,the rage,the ever-lasting vanity,the lies,the deciet,the relentless whining and infuriating pity.
you can let it all go
you can
no depression
no regression
no seperation
or aggression
just freedom from your self hate.
your self loathing.
your vanity and even shyness.
all of the things that bother you most
no you don't need anyone to help you
you are a big boy now
just take a deep breath
and see all of it wash away with the tide
let it go streaming out into the world
the words falling into one another
into an endless pool of meddled letters
and breathe out.
Author notes
i have no idea what happened...
What did you think
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wow you really don't like me
lol, i guess i should back off some since alot of what you wrote about in those powerful but harsh phrases applies to me. i don't have mommy's car though and i never did. i really have had more to deal with so maybe this isn't me. it's still powerful and harsh and raw. lots of bitterness seeping from the wounds of anger. it is an interesting read though.
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lol of course its not you personally... though if you think it applies and it makes you feel bad.....
that is why i write poetry, not only to let my emotions flow, but to make others feel.
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I think this shows true power. Good job
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thanks
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Yay! This is neato. It is more like abuse than an answer though. Usually when people freak out it's because they've run out of solutions. It is funny though, kick a man while he's down and all.
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good piece! an interesting way to say screw life and its curveballs. make it what you wish it to be. motivational and moving, i give it 4 thumbs up!
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Mint poem
wow that was a straight to the point read that was. i liked how u meantioned all of the key things about the human state and all the things associated with man such as greed. Mint Poem x
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