Count them down
One by one
Count them down
See who won
This is different
Not really so
This is different
Take it slow
Write in circles
Run away
Write in circles
It's ok
Go back
To the way it was before
Go back
Dont hit the floor
Thin ice
The sign you read
Thin ice
You turned and fled
A story of murder
Murder of yourself
A story of murder
Put back on the shelf
Poetic surmise
Not making sense
Poetic surmise
I'm getting tense
Strength in numbers
My numbers are few
Strength in numbers
What could money do?
Questionable
My heart is trying
Questionable
All the shit I've been buying
No more
I'm running out of words
No more
I'm just singing with the birds
Author notes
eh... I havent written in a while
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Absolutely great rhythm to this piece.
Most enjoyable.
You have made a grand entrance with this one lass.
Raise the roof and stack em up,
this one goes on top.
Many blessings gypsy,
LOWELL
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"Strength in numbers
My numbers are few
Strength in numbers
What could money do?"
I love this.
It feels like a song.
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Lulz...it's really sing-songy. Makes me thick of a cuckoo clock for some reason. 0_0; Weird. Still, not bad for a reentering the writing process write.
Cheers!
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hey babe this is good. You cant tell that you haven't written in awhile. I like it lots, I wish that I could say that I knew what it was about, but unfortunetly i can not. I love you.
I love the format in which you have written this. I really like how you repeted the words (which is the title in a way lol) but how all of the other words also rhyme. You get three clappys cuz I cant give you anymore.
Awesome write hun!
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