Cutting deep
Inside her veins
Coming to life
The blood
Takes over in time
Needing to bleed
Needing to feel
A pain
That she can control
The pain goes away
She some how conveys
A way to release
The things
She keeps bottled up inside
Feelings
She carefully hides
Among the lies
Hiding......
Whats to come
As the blade touches her skin
Her soul sighs within
Releasing the pain
She hides inside
Tears streaking down her face
She tries so hard to erase
The pain she feels
someday she'll have to face it
But for now
The blade takes it all away
For now anyway!
In a list
A contest entry
- Cut: To The Point by Lets Get Tragic.
1300 points, ended August 2, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a sad peom for using a blade doesn't take away pain...It adds to it...
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but it takes away the internal pain if only for a moment of the pain the blade caused and some doctors say that the endorphans that the cuts cause numbs the pain
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