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Rescue Me

 

 

 

 

Like a beautiful rose

 

floating throughout the sea

 

I wait in hopeful anticipation

 

for your soft touch

 

to rescue me

 

plant me deep within

 

your loving heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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30 Words or less
Prompt: Picture

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Comments

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  • Crazy Coconut gold member
    July 19

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    Very gifted with your words. This is very wow for me. So expressive and beautiful. Waiting for a soft touch to plant you deep within their heart. Really love this poem!!! wow!


  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    July 17
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    This was so sweet and soft
    I really enjoyed your take on the prompt...

    Well done

  • delightfulmess silver member
    July 17

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    Awe... Sigh... Oh that was like a sweet caress.
    Great smooth oooh so romantic flow.

    LOVED THIS!!!


    Delila


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 17
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    Sigh.. oh that is just lovely! To be planted deep in someone's heart... sigh..


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 17

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    Your words are soft and loving
    they caress the soul.
    Holds a tender place
    for one to take you too.

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