plastic water for
faking flowers,
a heart in bud
with no soil to bind,
I float face down
until I find the hand
to save me
In a list
A contest entry
- Delightful Evening Quickie by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended July 17, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Strong visual here


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good stuff
... the hand to save me ...

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Nice take on the image, great way to personify it ...so that it fits perfectly as the flower, and yet isn't limited to it..

congratulations on the shiny thing too


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Thank you, it took me a while to see what it really was hence the plastic lol it looked like a balloon
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yep ...I can see that too.... lol
you're welcome
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Perfection...I adore you take on the picture!
I would say good luck but I doubt you'll need it
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ohhh .. nice take on the image here .. finding that hand can be tough or easy ... depends on which hand you want to be saved by.
'a heart in bud with no soil to bind' outstanding!!!


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Oh I already got the hand I need hehehe..totally
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I do
's way too often
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awe.... WOW!!! this is excellent!
great take on this prompt. Such smooth yet powerful emotional imagery.
Thank you for entering my contest.

Delila

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Your title: Oh for the love of God...

You..thought of the title to get my attention? Okay, maybe that's self-centered.
"plastic water for
faking flowers"
LMAO witty, witty..."faking flowers" is amusing...and so is "plastic water". Like...a set of fake nature...
Mattel should totally launch that to replace the bland, blonde Barbie.
"with no soil to bind"
I likey this...'bind' is a groovetacular word.
"until I find the hand to save me"
You know, this could be more than love, and that's cool. (: It has an epic feel that's really...uh, epic.

Good luck FireShooter
Man, that's fun to say&type


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LOL Makes me sound like a dragon
hahaha...well i like making you puke so I had to use Love in the title didn't I LMAO!!
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Very nicely done. Good take on the prompt. Damn you're fast!!
Best of luck to you in the contest
Scott


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lol Aussie have to be...we're disadvantaged at being upside down
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Beautiful sis in law! Keep of the hand you have found!


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Oh I think he knows I am not letting his go lol Thanks S.I.L
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Photo is from 'photobucket.com'
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*sucker punches* Good luck FireShooter
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OUCH!!!!
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I gave it to you straight man (: Like ya askeddd
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rubbing her chin...ya sure did!
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