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Please Remember Me

O love, my love how do I let you go?

As each day passes I'm lost to you as you forget this world.

In sickness and in health was the vow I made.

I've kept that vow the best I can; up with you night and day.

But I am tired o' so tired and my body is giving up.

My spirit longs to hold you near and whisper I love you, dear.

The pain of touch keeps us apart because I love you so.

Tomorrow starts our path dividing and nearer to the day;

When your soul rises to Heaven above to heal and be restored whole.

Although our parting is but for a week, just so I can rest and revive my body and my soul.

Is this God's way of preparing me for our last goodbye?

I cannot bear this pain I feel deep within my heart even though I know our spirits will never part.

Will you even know that you've left our home?

For each passing day your memory fades and your eyes an empty stare.

My love, my love I love you so.

Please remember me.

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  • aurora13 silver member
    November 30, 2008

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    Love... shining through each and every line and expression of your poem.. Pure Love..
    Very beautifully written..
    Thanks for sharing, Good Luck!


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    heart felt


    My sweet dear friend, I sit here with tears falling like rain.Your poem tugged hard at my spirit, it allowed me to feel your pain, and the sadness of lonliness that comes with loosing the one that you love.It must be terrible to see your loved one, slowly forgetting his life and all who love him. You must be going through hell, and I would like to offer you my friendship if ever you need to vent your frustrations and sadness, I will gladly listen.
    My heart goes out to you and I send to you much love and happiness.
    God bless,
    ~Anne~.


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    October 31, 2008
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    Thank you for your most beautiful and powerfully spoken entry, Josie


  • Shadow Lynx
    August 11, 2008

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    a write that aches with pain, the pain of losing someone you love compares with nothing and you have delivered it with great sentiment ,good luck in the contest


  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 11, 2008

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    Aww how deeply heartfelt and emotionally tugging.
    This was so beautifully written & deeply touching.

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 20, 2008

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    ah..the soul is standing at the door of the house..and the loved is gone very far..touching piece.....well done

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