Some secret corner drags inside
violates independent individual entity,
even want heart so brave horse,
colt regrinding reins;
but you're not even worried.
Zephyr in certainty
put end of combat.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: Tuesday's gone with the wind
A contest entry
- Quickie Prompt by Little Eagle.
300 points, ended July 17, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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Thank you for your entry
Well, that seemed kind of vague and I can't really connect it to the prompt. But you kept with the thirty words.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
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