I look to the sky, the moon, and the sun
and see all that I was ever meant to see:
The source of my memories and dreams,
my soul...
Do you see?
A contest entry
- Profoundly Short And Impactful by 2lullabyhaven.
667 points, ended July 23, 2008, 18 entries
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Great charm
In these brief lines, is mystery and clarity, a question, and an answer of sorts. Quite beautiful
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short, to the point,AND DEEP... REAL DEEP
la la la la la la i liked it la la la
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Deeply sentimental I find this write lol thanks for entering and good luck to you lol
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profoundly short and impactful, well done :]
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nice
I like it, this has a universal feel to it as if, not only do u have a connection with nature and the universe, but u can appreciate how it's cause and effects, play a part in who u are and ur senses,showing that u are one with the universe and ultimatly that is who u are, and reflecting that this "source" guides u to the little miricales that we have been blessed to have such as, memmories, and dreams, souls to perfect...! That is what I get from this at least , I like this , good job!
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