No need to fear
illusions
There is no path but this
Hearts are
ever moving closer
Only one Truth exists
Author notes
Contest - 20 Words
Prompt: Always Follow Your Heart
A contest entry
- QUICKIE: Always Follow Your Heart by Lotus-Mama.
524 points, ended July 19, 19 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A beautiful and motivating write hun! I really like the message that you have written here, that along as there are truths and trust then there is no reason to fear the unknown in a relationship. (I maybe far off with that interpenetration, but that's what I got lol) Congrats on the HM! (hugs)
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Great interpretation!
Thank you
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Yes.. I think we all need to look into our hearts and find our Truth, and then find the courage to follow that!
Lovely write!
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Excellent use of twenty words
... and keep us ever on it.
Love Sol X
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I love this.... spirituality....love....Great write!!
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Only one Truth
only one Beauty
You captured something special here.
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I really enjoyed the rhymes of "this" and "exist". Though it is not so rhymy that it's cliché. beautiful. I think you have something quite introspective here. Be proud. I also enjoyed those first two lines. Spacing choices were effective as well. No critiques.
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Really? Well, thank you. Always lovely to have your visits. I was quite unsure of this very quick one but now that you've given it the okay I'll leave it here.
Thanks
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This was quick.
It seems pretty complete for a quick one. Like you need my approval. 
But yes, it's fine the way it is. You are quite good with these short writes lately. Indeed.
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Lol, yes, it was quick...like 2 minutes quick.
And yes, I need your approval.
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You jest.
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Never!
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Very nice take and I love the subtle rhyme () 20 words of beauty and emotion... Well done.
Ken
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Thank you
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