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True Love

 

 

 

If you love her

 

 

make her know it

with every breath

 

 

never stray away

give her every reason

 

 

 

 

...to stay

 

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20 Words
Always Follow Your Heart-Prompt

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  • Ms. Black Eyeliner silver member
    September 4
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    awww i loves it


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    July 20

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    awesome

    Congrats on the Gold Jeremy, a well deserved award.Your 20 words spoke volumes.Such wisdom was woven into your write.
    You are always a pleasure to read Jeremy, and your comments are always heartfelt, you speak and write with a heart of an angel.
    Blessings to you my friend.
    ~Angel-anne~


  • CaliOkie silver member
    July 19

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    Well earned gold. This message is timeless. Never pass by a chance to tell someone you love how important they are to you! Life is short, love completely and without reserve.

    Garrison


  • Crazy Coconut gold member
    July 18
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    you know you got my attention with this one! excellent poem!!! best of luck!


  • Lotus-Mama silver member
    July 18

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    OUTSTANDING!!!

    This touched my heart in it's deepest caverns! Beautiful and prolific!!! *sigh* Absolutely amazing!!! Thanks for entering!


  • mornings
    July 17

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    This is beautiful. You captured the most essential ways to showing true love and making her stay in six short lines and twenty words.

    You've shown here how to be concise and yet not lose profoundness.

    Thanks for sharing this one.

    joy

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