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Singing As Her Heart Stops

Singing as her heart is stopping
Laughing as tears of joy are dropping
Smiling because there is no more fear
So happy because the end is near

There is no more pain or sadness
No more torture, anger, or madness
Others may have called her insane
But she carelessly let the blood run from her veins

Her once lost soul is now found
And has departed without a sound
Now an angel with beautiful wings
Can't wait to see what her next life brings

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  • Sesheta
    July 19, 2008

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    I am curious at the inspiration, if it's not personal. It's still very good, meaningful in and of itself; many could relate to it, I'm sure. I adore the last stanza, and of course the first two lines.


  • one sweet love. .
    July 17, 2008

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    wow. you have never written a deep poem, yet it's so good. I must wonder what inspiered you to write it.