song-like and sweet as honey
not sugarcoated syrupy
pamela shares her ambrosia
a sweetheart but not silly
recalling clover as remedy
an angel melodic in memory
charming and cheerful in poetry
charming and cheerful in poetry
an angel melodic in memory
recalling clover as remedy
a sweetheart but not silly
pamela shares her ambrosia
not sugarcoated syrupy
song-like and sweet as honey
Author notes
Mira-Mirror
Pamela means SWEET, or HONEY -- Thank you, Sweetheart, for being an example of love, light and language creativity!
Photo: Pamela A. Lamppa
In a list
A contest entry
- #104 at Winklings for Winklings and Friends elsewhere of Pamela A Lamppa by Lyndon.
6000 points, ended August 28, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Mira...a wonderful name for a form used to emphasize the adnirable personal qualities of someone special and the meaning is made poignant and beautifully clear. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK
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What a lovely poem ...
in honor of a lovely woman.
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You seem to have captured the essence of Pamela in these lines. I like the way you structured this and the repeated lines mirrored back to the beginning. Best of luck in the contest!
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I'm so glad you decided to write for this contest. Pam certainly deserves a poem from you, she and you are of the best poets I know. Bravo!
Love,
Amera♥
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I know the face but not her work. Obviously, you both have sweet souls and talented pens. Best wishes in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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She is a lovely soul. So are you.
I get poetry written for me sometimes but not deep and heartfelt like this.
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You are amazing. This Mira Mirror is palindrome played beautifully. THANK YOU so much for this. Your words are quite beautiful.
You are good to me. ~Pamela 
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lol Pam will love this and you have described so very well. Love, C
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