Take, take my hand lover!
Don’t ever let me go.
Take, take my hand lover!
Forever let it show.
You were the one that found me in my darkest of times,
And you make my heart sing so much I’ll put it to rhyme.
There was a time, a place, a man; who knew me better than you
But you, through everything I’ve done, have chosen to see me through.
I’m not perfect in any way,
My broken heart tends to stray…
There was a time you’d look at me,
And oh my smile would set you free…
That Pretty Britty, such a fool;
Always used as another’s tool.
Though kindness never served her well
Her pain and heartache she’d never tell.
How can you really say,
That if it were a different day…
Though no one else could ever really know;
You’d turn to me and never let me go.
Take, take my hand, oh lover…
Please don’t let me go.
Author notes
My first write in awhile. It's not the best... it's really meant to be a song; I sang it whilst writing it so... I know it's nothing grand but, it just came to me.
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Its still great though. the question is who is it about. If anyone at all. I like the rhyme and its easy to pick up the rhythm and it definatly would make a good song.
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Its beautiful hun!
Just like my Pretty Britty!
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