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A Rose

To show my love tonight, I'll pick a rose
And tell myself I gave the rose to you
The sweetest darkest reddest rose that grows
And hope it tells you all I want it to

I'll see the rose beside me every day
And dream instead the rose is next to you
A perfect rose says all I want to say
And you are who I want to say it to

You are too far away to see my rose
But you can feel the love I send to you
Just like a flower you know that my love grows
And every day my love will bloom anew

And in each bloom reality is bent
I smell the rose and just detect your scent

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  • moonbumps silver member
    July 18

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    We are getting very arty farty withit too!!! Poem was lovely to read and my favourite flower in the background too-blissful-
    xxx Bumpy


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    July 18
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    Yes!

    It's a spiral to that stunning couplet.
    Luvit.


    • cricketjeff gold member
      July 18
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      Thank-you I was thrilled with the couplet, it really seems to work