some exist
in the last sorry
they will ever say
we forgive them,
life travels
and friends remain
I never felt it
the saddest of words
not like the sounds left
with fading footsteps,
ending melodies
or a movie's happy end
genuinely we stay
because we need crowds,
living not to please ourselves
but entrust others
with all our thoughts
and all our love
so the saddest moment,
the one we look back on,
with the most regret
is goodbye...
Author notes
Have not known you long, but in knowing you, I know you are one of the good ones, we will miss you and I won't say it...I'll just say 'see ya' because that means one day we may meet again.
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Great idea!!! Lmao sigh...
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McDreamy lol I had never thought of Mark that way lololol but my Dan sigh...lol I know what you mean,. Okay hun as long as we know you are doing well it will be enough 
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lol I will try and you take good care of you, try to drop by so we can say hi...Love, C
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Oh, this is a very heartfelt poem about saying goodbye. I am sure the contest holder will feel your words in her heart.
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awwwww *hugs* this is a wonderful and heartfelt sorrowed write, great job and good luck in the contest
take care,stephanie your sissy
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Thanks sissy, I know someone on here will miss her very much 
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i'll miss her
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Well...I actually don't say "Goodbye". I say "Later", or "Cya" (even if I won't see the person until a gajillion years later) but I understand where you're coming from.
"some exist in the last sorry"
I love that. It's so...well-written.
"movies happy endings"
I can't help but think it would sound a little better if it was "happy-ending movies." Just my opinion. =D
"because we need crowds"
Damn, you are making me think, but something about this line strikes me as SIGNIFICANT.
Oh yeah, and nice ellipsis at the end. (:
Good luck (:
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