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Two From The Deck


after the cards are dealt
i look down to the ones in front of me

king, queen suited in hearts
a strong starting hand

as the faces transform
into a portrait of us



                making the hand even stronger...


i'm all in




Author notes

Might sound gay to some...but I fused the two loves in my life...poker and her <3. I think it came out ok...feedback welcome on this...I miss her...

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  • SwtnSxy
    July 20

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    this does not sound gay it sounds beautiful i love how you blended you two passions together.. i love it keep on penning you are a true poet!
  • limechic
    July 17

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    great job, i like the metaphor...its really out there, but like you said, you fused two things you love

    great write =)