Today I heard her voice
on the summer breeze
it crept up to me
soft and fluttering
a mental sticky note
pinned delicately
to the mental dashboard
of my mundane thoughts
a delightful psychic scribble
wrapped in three boxes of thought
like fine imported chocolate
for me to unwrap and savor
one at a time
decadently ensconced
in gold foil wrappings
of dreams set on the wing
to dance among the laughter
of butterfly giggles
I scan the wish bubbles
blown my way with a kiss
unwrapping the thoughts
in trembling think-fingers
one
two
three
'I - LOVE - YOU'
a missive on the wing
caught in the breeze
of my floating mind
i hope she heard
my warm reply
echo on the dry wind
Comments
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great
thank u for applude on stop -
This was a really nice piece to read, and you have a unique and interesting style here. It's packed with emotion and powerful imagery.
I liked the whole thing but the last 6 lines were particularly moving, great work!
Michael
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hehe ^-^ great piece
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great
loved it
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