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Your Old Saxophone Notes Live Video (( Neo Soul Poetry ))

Your Old Saxophone Notes (( Neo Soul Poetry ))

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

 

Drinking ,

Your notes,

Tasting,

 

Saxophone

Juices ,

Daddy bass.

 

If you give me the funk

To slam dunk you and

Beep bop

Pine o pine

Harlem soul

Rain drops to the soothing

Of brotha curiosity .

 

As I let this erotic tongue

Band of mine kill his cat

And run my fingers through

His thoughts and make him

Pay me attention as I sit

In his lap and shoot

Craps of I am back.

 

To zap my definition

And re start his ignition

That I lost around Christmas.

 

This unfinished business of

Southern thick thighs thanksgiving

Is tearing a smile that ran flat

A mile ago . I let you let me

Go. But as I put this juke joint

Soul in the curl of your toes

And give sheen to words afro

Lick my bowl

Squeaky,

Clean .

 

As I instruct the dean of love

Pattern and gave soul to flickering lanterns

And cabbage is testing the sweat of your

Pulse just racing,

Yes

Your data

Of savory is marinating me and uhm

Cherishing the break up law

Of drinking ,

Tasting ,

Your old saxophone notes.

 

 

Neo Soul Poetry Artist :

The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

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Your Old Saxophone Notes (( Neo Soul Poetry ))

I totally love this Tar Potion guys!
I bet no one can guess what track that was?
Playing around with old thoughts and
No one in paticular to be clear

Neo Soul Poetry Artist The Red Cat Jazz of Love

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  • Floatational
    May 3

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    Wow how did I miss this before this is a wonderful write with flawless imagery to me, I really enjoyed this have a blessed day.


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      May 4
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      aye! you going into my history i see this is what i have created neo soul form different poetry that i am trending very zesty pretty strange but i guess once you get into reading my style you will like it thanks

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    Sweet...

    Luuuuurved the reference to saxaphone notes...I adore the sax and how its notes smoke slow tracks in pulses that tattoo need...loved too the phrase marinate me...yes that's how to be tenderized...

    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      November 16, 2008
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      i so so love this poem i had to listen to it myself i love it one of my favs by me i so love jazz all kind i have a old soul somwhere love i shall catch up on a few of your pieces tonight

      • Yvette Champ gold member
        November 16, 2008
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        I hear it...

        Yes...I hear that need to smoke' the sultry words...spoken word jazz with jive...Lady Day sung it straight too...

        No worries 'bout return reading...very few of my writes are in this genre..not sure many would appeal to you...I have one that is kind of different...its an adult write combining sensuality with an underlying theme to reassure all sisters that they have the right to simmer and feel good inside their own skins...


        let me go find a link 'sted of you having to trawl thru' reams of stuff that may instead perplex/vex lol ...

        my writes are all over the place...from personification of a cactus thru to word mumbling mad rambling




  • desertmountainie
    August 17, 2008
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    It's good, but if you could find a saxophone piece, I think that it would make it a lot better!!


  • dannyjay
    August 1, 2008
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    this was very nice. you spoke nice and clear and it just flowed. thanks for the read

  • mcfreeman
    July 26, 2008
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    Bravo..sexy sax...


  • Ephiphany
    July 25, 2008

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    Very Classy and Jazzy

    Not sure who the artist is, but the tones of the hour is soothing while I listened to your words with my eyes closed. Great piece, Love

    Always,
    Boss


  • Dishy
    July 24, 2008
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    Fantastic

  • Climbing2nothing
    July 21, 2008
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    wow! sexy, the flow of rich worded discriptions is beautiful sometimes shocking and always intruiging, not to mention the live version brings it to life with such magic rhythm and saxaphone, phew, think I'll go have a shower...

    w jazz flute and a martini
    -JAS


  • Sudo Nimh silver member
    July 20, 2008

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    wild words woman! I couldnt make the vid play but i liked what i read and i can only imagine it an impressive performance!


  • rose petal desires
    July 20, 2008

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    another masterpiece here auntie i so love this a whole lot i think its you most certainly your voice goes quite well with the words here

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    July 20, 2008
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  • ennovy silver member
    July 18, 2008

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    Your read, and voice was magnificent..the words sweet, smooth. Excellent piece of poetry....Now for the artist I know am way off...but it reminded me of a very young Miles Davis. Darn it I should know I come from the beatnik era......I enjoyed this one...novy


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 18, 2008
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    Beautiful!!!

    Such a sound of sweet delight, in for a long night. As the tunes of a Saxophone hits each flawless note, it brings the peace into pieces of all that you've wrote. THanks for sharing Neo Soul, the one and only "The Red Cat Jazz Of Love." Mushy. The King.

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo


  • onesugar gold member
    July 18, 2008

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    Julia you have an amazing voice that grips the listener and takes them on an amazing journey.

    I thoroughly enjoyed this

    Love ~sugar~


  • kennethlaney
    July 18, 2008
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    Very Good

    Your voice goes well with jazz baby.
    "BOO"


  • rainbow bi trinity
    July 18, 2008

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    i love this man it was tight as hell i enjoyed reading and listening who is it bob baldwin? i tried any way


  • Dear daijah
    July 18, 2008
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    so this is what u took pic's well any why i like it...


  • D Saul So Sexy
    July 18, 2008

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    We getting married ga and hell yea im serious don’t care. I have to wait until you get the wild out you though I am going to put the smack down on you ga make me a trip to Texas I love this here I listen to this 3 times I just love this part you was just so on point with it as I let this erotic tongue band of mind it was just the pattern of It you need to go do dat record it get it on myspace so I can bump dat I know who this is to ha ha I want to give everyone else a chance though so I will private send it ok then make sure after a few people don’t know you make it clear ya boy guessed it thanks to you I be listening o this stuff to see how on earth you listen to it but its your way so ~ I liked it I want it on my myspace


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    I love this too girl you work it. Is that song from a soundtrack? I sounds like something from School Daze or maybe Phylis Hymen? Great write ma

    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      July 18, 2008
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      damn sexy nope! but i like phylis hymen dont laugh ok my square side i listen to Frank Sinatra, Nat Cole, Billie Holiday when I say I am Neo Soul watch out baby thanks


  • hotchocolate gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    really great! Love the music in the background!!!!  


  • Swangrnv gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    wow!

    and man I so love the saxophone! That's for real too, I learned to play in music class in the 7th grade! l.o.l. I turned out to be pretty good too! great write Jewels!

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