Wispy light winds,
blew the hours,
and minutes by,
Tuesday came and went.
Long awaited day
brought disappointment.
My heart was shattered,
like a crystal vase
into a million fragments…
Author notes
Tuesday's gone with the wind
A contest entry
- Quickie Prompt by Little Eagle.
300 points, ended July 17, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your entry
Another more literal translation. But I like it. I like that you worked at showing and making more imagery with your words.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
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