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I am the ivy that climbs over your walls
covering the grey, seeping into the cracks
Hiding you within your cracked windows
before you can look out and see my face
waiting, waiting in the silence
Spreading like a cancer you accept
enjoying what I do to you
marking you as my own
And as I hold the door shut
tears running down my cheeks
you find yourself trapped in this broken room
bleeding with shards of glass


Each day the clouds pass by
bringing us into an early night
though even the starlight won't save us
We built this tomb where we lie together
dust gathering where our bodies touch
the ivy growing to cut our wrists
I'm no longer the only one bound
you keep us in this promise
the last words you spoke before meeting my lips
"I am the other side of the mirror"
and I cannot break you without losing my reflection

Author notes

Photo Credit: Wade Winters

Maybe this is why I haven't written poetry for a while. It just degenerates into dark weirdness.

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  • squirrelgirl
    January 24

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    Some of the ivy on the house looks sort of like a hand, its cool. A contest write! Unfortunately, you didn't win anything. I hate reading the ones that you enter into a contest after the contest is over. Then I can't wish you good luck. Anyway... I should probably read it already, seeing as I haven't yet.

    Aww, and then it got all sad. It seemed ok in the first couple of lines...
    'covering the grey, seeping into the cracks
    Hiding you within your cracked windows'
    You use cracks and then cracked... perhaps you could rephrase that a little? Use different words? Great write!
    ~squirrel


  • The Poetic Angel
    August 7, 2008

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    i like the way you have wrote this

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