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Proving the Truth

Love
Yes, true love
It exists and I have it
I have the fairy tale love I've always wanted and believed
My one only
True love
After everything
He still gives me a chance
He offers his life as a part to mine forevermore
I owe him
My undying attention and love
I want to prove to him
That true love truely exists

Author notes

Option 7, interesting and a little challenging. Maybe something from the first poem you wrote with this form could be a title for it. I hope I did well with this form.

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  • Judith Chandler
    November 3, 2008

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    I still don't know if true love truely exists but it's worth thinking about and trying for. Nice write.


  • FlamesDragoness
    November 2, 2008

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    such a beautiful write and simply done....
    shining bright
    the truth and beauty of....pure love!

    well done,
    well done!
    thankyou for your entry into this contest!
    May you always bask in the truth of love!


  • Saphira Calvaire gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    Interesting. I am not up on the forms but this read well. I am glad you found your true love and that person can be the one you will be with. Nice job good luck in the contest

  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    July 25, 2008

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    Hmmm very interesting. That one true special person is worth a lot, worth so much... After all, they are what keeps us going each and every day.