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One Hot Night

I looked into your eyes and the crowded room disappeared. I am mesmerized by your stare. I could already feel the ache of desire flowing through me. I move on closer to where you are. My heart starts beating the tune of want. My mind is saying no, but my heart is saying yes. I can hear the pumping of my own heart, when I get near you. I see your breasts pushing hard against your top erect nipples my loins stiffen. I softly touch your skin, and kiss your sweet lips. My tongue slides into your mouth you are so sweet to taste. While my hands slip down to your pants. My breath, I struggle to breathe. I grab your hands and run them down the front of me. I feel the firmness of your body and catch a scent of your musk. I draw in closer and closer and again slip my tongue down your throat. My hardness is pulsing as I whisper in your ear. I move over to a table, I lay back on it. I see your milky thighs disappear under your short skirt. I take my top off revealing all. I cup your breast and cover your nipple feeling it grow under the flick of my tongue. Sliding my hand up to, feel your wetness. I rub my hands down my own body to find you. I unzip my pants letting my manhood out. I sit up start playing first, with my hands following my tongue and mouth. Your mouth so hot and wet my shaft still growing and filling with lust. Feels the pulsating and not daring to give up. Slides mouth over further and further. I pull myself out wanting to slide into your velvet. I pull your legs over my shoulders, as you lay on the table. Being teased by, you sliding inch at a time. I part your lips and slowly enter you my shaft so slowly going to your depths of your desire. I let the slowness take me in, though I wish for it to be faster and harder. I tease you as your hips arch to take more of me. My hips arch as far can I can, ready for you to thrust. I feel you aching for release on me, but still I tease so slowly sliding in and out. I wrap my legs around you pulling you in closer. I bend you so far back your womanhood so open to my carnal want. I take what ever I can get from you, as I am now your rag doll. My rhythm starts sliding all the way to the hilt getting faster as I disappear into you. I feel you in my like there is a point of no return. You tighten around me I can feel the start of your orgasm. I start to moan louder and louder until the air is filled with my voice. I start slamming into you harder, faster and deeper. I love you pounding me, like a piece of steak. My shaft is on fire. Your wetness flowing all over me, and still I go harder. I let out the orgasm like a breath of air... But I still want you harder and harder. I feel you clench around me but I want you to cum like you never have before. So I keep the rhythm as you scream fuck no! The orgasm so huge but still I pound into you. Bringing you to new heights, never before reached. Has been brought to the top level and still is being pounded by… My huge shaft that that is going to places never before reached. Still going harder than ever too. You cum again screaming I feel myself getting close to exploding. I scream for the second time, waiting for you to cum. I feel every part of me gather at the head of my shaft. I push your knees right back to your chest. My legs go over your shoulders once again. I slam into you as I feel the rip tide gather I scream as the flood gate opens and streams of jism pour out of me into you and still I cum never ending filling you. I can feel the sensation of your load. It fills me like it's never ending. I shudder and still it won’t end cuming forever like in a vacuum. Can feel you coming, wondering will it ever stop? I see you for the first time an animal of sated lust staring back with a grin of disbelieving of which just took place. You have seen that is the true animal within... You think its over but still I want you. I slide out of you and go down to taste the pool of lust we created. I let you slide as far as need be... I let you stick your tongue in as far as it can go. I eat our salted sweetness you once again start to quiver not believing this is happening. Thinking in my mind how much further could this beast go? I draw with my tongue our juices from deep inside you and cover your clit with them sososo wet. Feels the power of the tongue deep inside. Your clit starts to harden again your lips still swollen, gather again for release. Waits for what else you have installed... Our juices run down the crack of your butt flowing like a river as still I drink from you. Loves the feeling of such a powerful tongue, licking me as far as he can go. My tongue begins to wander down. Further to the point of no return.  You are so swollen and still ache for more. Wishing I could have my jaws around your shaft. I reach up and grab your hair pulling your head to my shaft. Knowing what I am supposed to do fall straight there. You eagerly take me in your mouth as I begin to grow hard again. I can feel the pulsating but further you go in. I want you to swallow me. I thought you'd ever ask. I feel your tongue flicking me as harder I grow wanting you to drink my seed. I use the power of my tongue to get you more and more, though you are thrusting further down my throat. I grab the back of your head pulling you to me as I feel myself getting close. I wait for it knowing it's about to happen. My lust for you is peaking I want to cum in your mouth, i'm aching for release. I use the teasing of my tongue to get you there more quickly. Oh fuck I scream as I feel it gather again. I wait of it still, ready to swallow. The fire shoots again and again as I cum into your mouth. As struggle to swallow it all at once, but it goes down and down...  My fire is yours forever so sweet. I take the whole lot, even licking the tip. I look in your eyes to make sure it’s not a dream. The glint in mine should tell you otherwise. I think I reached heaven not once but twice. I can guarantee you did.

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  • Swtpoetryman
    July 21, 2008

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    A FINE PIECE, INDEED (PUN INTENDED)!

    GOOD LUCK in 'The Make Me Blush' contest with this juicy and tasty piece that passed me hardness test - hands down -and we all know where, Baby! If I read this one right it seems that one of you was enjoying a tasty cream pie! YUMMY! There's nothing like a feast after the tangy, salty, and creamy juices of two lovers have been all mixed up in one, two, or three BIG O's of lust and love!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • TyrannyForestFairy
    July 21, 2008

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    Wow! This was hot sis, you have a specialty for a erotica lol , it was just mind blowing. Great job and congrats on the trophie

    ~Emily~ xx


  • sensualbutterfly
    July 19, 2008

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    VERY HOT!!!! Like I said before, this is going to be tougher than I thought to judge! Thanks for the entry


  • kiss1985
    July 19, 2008

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    hotchocolate told me to check this out and this is a hot write!!!!! Looking forward to some more.
    Oh fuck I scream as I feel it gather again. I wait of it still, ready to swallow. The fire shoots again and again as I cum into your mouth. As struggle to swallow it all at once, but it goes down and down... My fire is yours forever so sweet.
    Have you been to stories you would great at that!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 19, 2008
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    You did a great job with this piece!
    I love the imagery and passion that
    you wrote this with. Well done and
    congrats on your trophy! Good luck
    to you with it in this next contest!




    Jeremy0826

  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 19, 2008

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    You did a great job with this piece!
    I love the imagery and passion that
    you wrote this with. Well done and
    congrats on your trophy! Good luck
    to you with it in this next contest!




    Jeremy0826

  • mcfreeman
    July 18, 2008
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    A flood of passion in a scene

    overflowing with words of lust....


  • theburninglegend silver member
    July 18, 2008

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    um

    well written, a few spelling, typo, and grammatical errors, otherwise you have done a fabulous Job in this piece. Good luck my fellow poet


  • EvansV
    July 18, 2008
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    it should be titanium trophy damnway to go i love it


  • hotchocolate gold member
    July 18, 2008

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    oh ya I'm hot should I say more!!!!!!!! Good Luck in the contest!  Smile

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