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Comatose

Realized when I was waking up,
me eyes never opened.
My own personal comatose.
My hand slowly grips,
the only life my body can hold on too.
The yellow reflection in eyes,
hold your dirty little secret.
Now for hope and integrity,
I peek through blood soaked lashes
and hope to see someone new.

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  • Angelflower
    July 23, 2008

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    This was a very unqiue take on the prompt.. I really enjoyed this.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..

    Angel