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People can change


Losing the essence on which
I used to thrive
No longer have to
Suffer to stay alive
Life is gold
Since we can survive,
No better time for
This to arrive

I used to believe
That I was battle worn
A creation built
For hate and scorn
Darkness fell
When I was born,
Binds and boundaries
Lay dead and torn.

So listen to my words
No matter your age range
Because here’s an honest lesson;
People WILL and do change…

Author notes

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The whole spark behind this poem is from the picture prompt of a black and white clown holding a coloured flower.
The idea I got from this was a story.
This young clown picks her first flower thoughtfully and tells us her story and how she CAN and WILL change...
Dunno-sorry if it's not what your looking for :/

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  • pimp daddy satin
    July 23, 2008
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    wonderful


  • darkheart76
    July 17, 2008
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    great

    loved it


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    aww well this a lovely way to look at the pormpt, and i thank you for entering, i really enjoyed this,a dn the ending was powerful
    good luck and keep writing
    stephanie ♥