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Feet of Clay

To a future that reads bland and incoherent,
yesterday seems quite forgotten,
for today is ripe with dismay,
look to far away horizons,  
scaling mountains,
with feet of clay

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prompt: Tuesday's gone with the wind

written 7/17/08

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    July 17, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry

    For a moment I couldn't see how this fit the prompt, but then as I read over it again I see the message still carries the weight of the prompt.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy