A turning point
flowing on wind,
bringing to us
remnants of hope
and guidance, unmasked
and ripe. Waiting for
fingers to grasp the pen
and write our last love poem.
Author notes
.
A contest entry
- Quickie Prompt by Little Eagle.
300 points, ended July 17, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 8 of 8
-
please pretty please dont make this your last poem dove..you write beautiful poetry..congrats on winning silver..xxx
-
you sure do know how to do Good poems...................very GOOD
-
-
thnak you gabby, love ya
-
-
-
Very beautiful Cindy i always love the choice of words you use in your poems.
-
Beautiful poem
I hope you never write your last love poem
-
"remnants of hope and guidance" is sometimes all one has to mend what was torn, with tender threads of love.
From time to time, it is enough.
These words bear wings of hope, until the final line. Why
the last love poem?
-
Thank you for your entry
Where this actual prompt came from does relate to love. I like the direction you took this in. 'Flowing on wind' I think that is my favorite part.
Thanks for entering and good luck.
Tammy
Adding your comment:
1 - 8 of 8
