Your delicate hands
running between my thighs
with a sigh, a cry
a hasty kiss goodbye,
I am thinking about you.
Shaking, willpower breaking,
Lost to your touches
and kisses of infinite sweetness
that have left me aching
I paused to watch you as you slept,
thinking about what a beautiful
and sweet woman you are
and how lucky I am to be your lover
your knight, you were lying in a fetal position
on your right side, your legs pulled up,
you arms folded in front of your chest
the sheet was pulled between your legs
allowing an unhindered view of your thighs and back
The scene ignited the fire inside me I bent to kiss you
on your back to set the mood and awake you
to my flavored tastes as you stirred, I spread kisses
along your long beautiful neck, then to your thighs
I launched my tour of kisses where I lingered,
gently making each one last a while
Please tell me what you think?
Comments
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Well very sexy and sensual. Your imagery in this peice is awesome i could picture a woman with her sheet wrapped between her legs, Your poem enhances her beauty!
Very well written and tastefully done,
Your dear friend,
~Lisa~
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Dear friend Lisa, lol
hahaha, I could have done better, but I have done greate so that is all that counts right? lol well thank you so much.
well I just ended another contest and it was a real good one, interesting writes and people, all came out winners, lol.
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A good sequel.
I like the way it's written, there's something natural and passionate about it. -
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hahaha, mrocum
thanks, I knew some of you would like it, i just did not know how much, lol thanks for your support and comments
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