I am lost in the canyon
between your thighs.
As your fingers trail through my spine
there is no time to waste.
the urge has us tied in knots.
Your lips find the swell of my tongue,
exciting a deep, unquenchable ache.
I am drawn to you by heat that is unseen,
a fire that will not break.
Your fingers trail along
my thighs, and crotch delicate and soft;
while your lips paint
a red flame on my eyes
Together we begun to climb,
our bodies glistening with passion's tears,
our muscles rigid and
flex enough to sear the
Pulsing swell of tight skin
our only crime is our sins
Copyright© John J Makuer
Author notes
"We love our crazymomma"
this is one of my Hot Fire sequel poems to come, I hope yall like it. Good luck to me in th econtest, lol.
In a list
A contest entry
- Make me blush *Adults Only* by sensualbutterfly.
350 points, ended July 28, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sappy love poems by crazymomma.
800 points, ended July 27, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Seven Deadly Sins by Genesis.
1200 points, ended August 20, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think?
Comments
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Thank you for entering. A tale of lust, on the brink of pornographic. Far enough, almost too far...you know? I like it. A very nice and explicit write. Thank you again for sharing.
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I have to admit this is not what I expected in this contest but I like it alot. It is hot but not smut and the imagery had me getting hot too. Thanks for entering and good luck
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VERY NICE!! I can't wait to read the sequels...Thanks for entering
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sensualbuterfly
I just want to say thank you for reading my writes, and hope you enjoy the sequel, lol again thanks for coming through
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Very nice start very erotic!
My favorite line was
Together we begun to climb,
our bodies glistening with passion's tears,
I know this is a make me blush contest but that line was the essence of two's souls.
Well done!
~Lisa~
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Lisa
hahahaha, I tried to paint the picture right and i even though it would not be the best sequel, but it did turn out to be one of my favorites of the month, thanks for your support, lol so how is that coffee coming? hahahahaha
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I do like this one indeed.
I want to check out the sequels now.
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mrocum
Samuel
I thought you would, lol well hey thanks reading and coming through, god bless and have fabulous time reading the rest of the sequel, lol
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