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Seraphima Rebakah

Hear my call, oh other beings...
...my Goddess soars, in Our names...
She wish to fly, on Dragon's wings...
...though only know, of Our pains...

And to see, her home, so far...
...she'll leave us Torn asunder...
And to feel, her Royal Scar...
...she'll let out Cries of Thunder

To feel her Wrath, one only need...
...to hear her words of wisdom....
Though to us, she'll Always be...
...the rightful truth, to envision...

To know death, on Dragon's wings...
...the fate of all, that try...
To feel pain, of friends' Goodbyes...
..though she'll Never truly die..

So Hear my call, oh other beings...
...my Goddess soars, in Our names...
She wish to fly, on Dragon's wings...
...though only know, of Our pains...

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My first poem, for the first I loved. Take a look.

My first poem, for the first I loved.

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  • kodi scanlon
    August 17, 2008

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    amazed

    i feel absolutely speechless i stare in shock of the emotions your pen bleeds. its as if that part of you is forever embodied in these favored words


    • Bane Wraith
      August 17, 2008
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      Humbled

      She is actually now my EX, believe it or not... but that was... one of the first times I poured myself into my work. Nothing came even close to that in a while.