Don't tell me to hurry it up
Or quicken the pace
I know i should do something
I'm a disgrace
Don't say i should speak out
I know what to do
I just delay
I'm the bay
The real waves
Are off in the haze
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wow there is so much compacted within this short and simple piece that within the lines and words there is a lot of detail and thought. the way it resembles who you are but also has a deep feel of fustration with people telling you what to do and how to do it and when and where...well that was the feeling that I got from this piece. amazingly written
Charlotte
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