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What My Heart Desires

People keep telling me to move on,
To let go of you.
I can't just do that.
I can't even think about it.

My heart and body do things.
When I'm around you,
My heart accelerates to speeds
Not ever racers can think of.

When I see your beautiful smile,
My knees turn to jello,
And my heart melts
Almost all the way to the floor.

Your face used to glow with happiness,
And my heart will always be yours.
I wish I could see that romantic smile,
Just once more.

What my heart desires,
Is something I want from only you.
I want it sooner or later,
But not anyone except you can give it.

I want to feel your arms around me;
To feel you soft lips on mine.
I want you to feel my heart race
Everytime you hug me.

I want you to catch me
Because I'll fall when you speak my name.
You have the gentle touch...
I want it to give me goosebumps.

The way I feel about you cannot be helped,
Because it will be this way forever.
You are the only one
Who can quench my heart's thirst.

My heart thirsts for you love,
For you passion and romance.
As I've said before,
The lock and key to my heart spells your name.

I want you to hold me
And love me forever.
I want to be yours
And no one elses.

My heart desires these things
That only you can give to me.
Please, my darling,
Just love me and grant my heart its wishes.

Author notes

This is for Daniel again... By the way, I love your contests! anyway... I love this kid a lot! and I can't wait until we're 16 so I can see if he'll at least be my friend. I think he's avoiding me because he doesn't want to get serious again... we can't... anyway I really hope you like it!

~Koko~

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 10, 2008

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    Amazing work here! It's great to read
    a sequel from another poem. It's really
    interesting to see the story evolve and
    how your hearts come closer together.
    Well done!




    Jeremy0826


  • Lislaine
    August 9, 2008

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    awww.. this is a really beautiful poem... I can say that I felt the same way for my ex in the beginning of your poem and feeling the same way for someone i love when you began saying love thinggss
    I LOVE IT.. tc


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 23, 2008
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    Aww I loved it and thank you glad you like my contests .
    Daniel this message in poetry is sent to you
    so enjoy and value the love and feelings that flow from this poem.
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie


  • maralisa silver member
    July 18, 2008
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    The way I feel about you cannot be helped,Because it will be this way forever.You are the only one Who can quench my heart's thirst.wonderful poem if you are meant to be it will happen I hope your words furfill your hearts desires good luck in the contest