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Forever Lost

 

 

 

Dark skies befall a lonely heart
contented hopes are shattered,
left to flow away silently
down the concrete gutters of a broken life.

Somber cries of loneliness
are heard drifting upon the wind,
as tears of mournful sorrow
cascade cheeks in a river of disconnected dreams.

Sinking slowly in the shadows,
despair overcoming a gentle soul
grasping and choking it of vital breath
The essence of all that once was draining away,

Forever lost.

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Photo prompt credit: Never got to say goodbye by Create_Destroy

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  • Angelflower
    July 23, 2008

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    I truly loved this.. The image was so heartfelt and sorrowful.. I can relate to it so much it brings tears to my eyes.. I hope that one day your heart is no longer lonely.. Thank you very much for sharing this.. best of luck..

    Angel


  • Cannonsfire
    July 17, 2008

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    This is so sad and it sings that soulful lonely song, searching for someone to hear you. I hope someone answers your plea. love, C