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[ cutting is my way of life ]

cutting is my way of life
it seems to make everything better
i hope you'll understand

cutting is a way of life
its like a drug
i'm addicted to my blade

cutting is my way of life
it doesn't make me weird
it doesn't make me strange

cutting is my way of life
it gives me something new to think about
in a way it makes the pain go away

you take a pill
to make the headache go away
i cut my wrists
to make my heartache go away

 

don't hate me

for doing something a little diferrent frm everone else

 

you tell me to be my own person

but when i try to

you punish me

Author notes

i hope this helped it is all true people need to know its an addiction and that you are being emo-emotional and that it just expressing yourself

A contest entry

any other topics i should try to wright about?

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  • Unknowing...
    January 14

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    wow... this sounds so much like me in my first year of high school. good work but if you can try to find some other ways to deal with problems..it'll help you in the long run belive me..

  • likeforeignpost
    July 19, 2008
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    the pill/wrist part was really cool

  • Zannah
    July 17, 2008
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    Great write. Good luck in the contest.

    Zannah


  • DevinCora
    July 17, 2008
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    awesome i like the last bit..

    "don't hate me
    for doing something a little diferrent frm everone else

    you tell me to be my own person
    but when i try to
    you punish me"




    I love it... and it is so true!!!! Its a great write really!!!!


  • Lets Get Tragic
    July 17, 2008

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    Oh my goth.

    "you take a pill
    to make the headache go away
    i cut my wrists
    to make my heartache go away"

    Those are some of the words I have been searching for inside my head, to find them in a poem!! Excellent job, thanks for entering!


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 17, 2008

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    Good poem steph i loved it alot its very good and a great write. :]] hope you win the contest..
    lovers,
    Shelly
    Mwah..

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