It's my most conscious, unconscious choice.
My way of displaying my own deep inner voice.
Like the addict goes about getting his high
to decrease what he feels deep inside, (sigh...)
this is what I do, cut and cut, my way through.
A contest entry
- Cut: To The Point by Lets Get Tragic.
1300 points, ended August 2, 2008, 16 entries
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Like the addict goes about getting his high
to decrease what he feels deep inside, (sigh...)
you just summed me up there lol
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Ian, its time for new venues lol?
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its short and true.....
i love the amount of emotions displayed in such little words.
"like the addict goes about getting his high"
such a true phrase, even though cutting is a negative we express it in a way that makes it positive to us, just like addicts do with drugs!!!! its perfect!!!!
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Thank you so much for this review; I like how you have stated your thoughts on it lol
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That's absolutely right. They just do it because they have to. Sad. It's a really good write. I don't know if I could do one on this subject but perhaps I could do it on why I eat potato chips! Addiction really and no logical reason.
Good luck with this piece.
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I just feel that all addictions share something bonding in common-as so what applies to one on some level applies to them all hahaha don't quote me, hahaha but that's just how I feel about it lol
thanks for your reviews; I appreciate them lol
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Haha! Love the title. Very short sweet and to the point, with the right amount of meaning. Very nice indeed, thanks for entering!
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