Daisies spoke your name
as the night fell upon
shooting stars and fireflies,
the man on the moon smiled
whispering words of love
as the breeze kissed my cheek.
I found comfort for I was no longer
~nobody,your name was etched
on my heart and I believed
in you, for I had discovered you.
Author notes
to know you
A contest entry
- to know you... by going nowhere.
900 points, ended July 17, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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See!
You still have the romantic untamed heart. It really wants to speak for you. Let it! A bronze that touched my jaded being.
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Oh.. some beautiful imagery in this! Sigh.. oh how I wish for feelings such as these. Congrats on the bronze sis!
Love,
me
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...and a song of love was sung,
drifting on eddies of quietude,
propelled across time and space,
as creation rejoiced,
for meaning was restored.
In discovery was soul remade,
born again into the light,
growing forth in fields,
to blossom on the heart
your name
Beautiful write sweetheart, deserving the award.
Love,
Mouser
xoxoxoxoxoxox
Sun and stars shine no brighter than you!
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There is a magical sort of quality to this that I really enjoyed -- the daisies, the moon, the breeze kissing the poets cheek.
Congrats on your bronze trophy.
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the softness of your words leave me with a sigh in my heart... discovering someone to trust, to know they will be there... it's a beautiful thing.
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