Awakening Love- Firebird F

I awakened one morning,

to pierce through the darkness,

surrounding the light,

and saw the face of Christ-

and I saw God's Sons bursting forth in astounding rays,

of the 7 colors of His spirit,

covering the world with God colored love-

and I saw the firebird rising to meet the Sun,

with healing on his wings, leaving the scent of,

roses behind him-

and I heard the violin playing the melody,

of saints-

and I loved,

without cause...

I love you

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Ice Queen
May 4

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Very colorful piece, it reminds me of something but I'm not quite sure what yet. Anyways wonderful job, I liked it.
Rasputin
March 11

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not bad
i like this piece, it is colourful and imaginative and coveys a feeling of serenity and peace. the bit about the firebird going off to meet the sun was mythical and great to read and it put an fabulous image in my mind, good stuff
sammyb21
March 8
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great
id say great poem overall. no problems at all.
PrabhuDayal Khattar
July 20, 2008

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Ah..I can recognise it is you..always with a melody of the life and the words....well done and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece in my contest...
Terry Collett
July 19, 2008
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An optimistic poem.
Good and optimistic in tone and theme.
Tirrell
July 19, 2008

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I love the imagery of natural scenes within this, it gives a pleasant tone to this beautiful write! Best of luck in the contest.