Shining hard was the opportunity,
I lunged to get it definitely,
Shine was put out and the thing gone,
I remained standing alone,
Life also goes off like this often seeing opportunities go by.
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I remained standing alone,
Life also goes off like this often seeing opportunities go by.
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- Tiny Ballads by CelticQueen.
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Hmm. Don't know that I would consider this a ballad, especially with that long last line. Why the long last line? celtic queen
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