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To My Majestic Beauty

 
To my majestic beauty; please know
that I am forever in your debt.

I beseech you, wake me and guide me on my quest.

Brighten my journey with your splendor
as you accompany me on my way.

Fill my heart with your fiery presence;
as you have done so many times in the past.

Reach out and touch my face with your radiant beauty,
filling me with the warmth you possess.

Ageless you stand before me in all your glory;
tempting me to wonder.

Mysterious, defiant, and unapproachable;
your loyalty strong and steady,
never asking, never needing, unwavering.

As if you know all and are unaffected.

If by chance there are days we do not meet,
I will miss you more than I have words to say.

I pray you do me the honor of waking to you
every morning, from now until the end of my days.

For there has never been a more spectacular day;
than one spent with you.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 23

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    This is a very romantic poem that has brought a smile to my lips. It speaks to me, deep down inside. Congrats on all those contests this won in. You are a true romantic soul.


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    March 22

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    So very wonderfully sweet
    Spending a day with the one you love is truly a gift from God
    I like this one!
    Thank you for sharing and for being part of this contest!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 28, 2008

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    Good stuff and an excellent description of a real beauty!


    Thanks for another very strong entry.


  • Dark Otter
    September 23, 2008
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    This got quite a response!

    Something in this must have touched us. I can't explain what I felt. But I know its there.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 19, 2008

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    Awe... such a wonderful endearing piece.
    really enjoyed this write and thank you
    for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • sensualbutterfly
    September 5, 2008
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    Beautiful! What a great job you have done!


  • hotchocolate gold member
    September 4, 2008
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    I love this and it shows that you don't take it for granted! This is a great write!
    Good Luck!


  • Fallen-Phases
    August 24, 2008
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    a sweet write, very heartfelt, a great piece.
    best of lucks
    mlg


  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    August 24, 2008
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    aww. so sweet and heartfelt, thanks for your entry and best of luck


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry and best wishes in the judging.

    Margaret

  • Broken-Bones
    August 20, 2008

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    Ahhh. You write about a beautiful love and it is clear to see the affection and admiration. You paint a picture of a lover who is strong and more than able to take your breathe away. I loved the lines "Brighten my journey with your splendor, as you accompany me on my way." I thought that was so romantic and shone with togetherness. An enchanting poem, well done x


  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Wow; this was so beautiful.. left me breathless. The ending was so romantic with

    "For there has never been a more spectacular day;
    than one spent with you"

    --Amazing write

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • Carly Pop gold member
    August 17, 2008
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    thank you for your entry


  • xwarriorXprincessx
    August 15, 2008

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    i am crying. i am seriously crying.

    this.
    is.
    beautiful.

    if i have ever seen it--this is beauty. there is a bittersweet honesty to this that is so unmistakable and so just... has this way of nailing me right to my core. this is the first piece in this contest that made me cry. no worries that is a good thing.

    i said in the prompt that i wanted something that would give me that hole-in-the-soul feeling.

    this did it. this was it. hole in the soul is an understatement. you opened it up and tossed in a bomb while u were at it.

    absolutely amazing. i love this piece. more than i can express.

    so beautiful.

    thank you sooo sooo very much for entering this. this is exactly what i wanted to see.

    best wishes and best of luck!

  • piccola silver member
    August 8, 2008

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    Whoever this is for must be very happy. I would love it if someone would write like this for me. Beautiful. Thank you for entering and allowing me to see it.


  • SignifyingNothing
    August 8, 2008

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    Well, this is a great tribute so someone. Quite heartfelt and well-expressed. At first I thought this was about a significant other, then about God. I think its a significant other, but you really must love and idolize the person.

    Very nice entry, thanks for sharing it.


  • Hetha gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    There is something warm and inspiring and at the same time sweet when I read this poem. Your gratitude, for whatever reason to this person is loud and clear, and it is easy to see why, while still retaining a sense of mystery. Thank you for entering this gem in my contest


  • lightswitches
    July 31, 2008

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    I don't know. There is something about when poems are in bunches like this. Oh and the red font over the black was an eye soar.
    I don;t want to come across as too heavy, but I really did like it, nonetheless. It is just that the presentation doesn't suit your obvious true talents here.
    thank you for entering


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 19, 2008
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    Welcome to All Poetry

    This is such a wonderful write of description and gratitude. there is so much depth and meaning to your words that has a wonderful feel to it. it also has a mystery to it that leaves the reader wondering why it is that you are forever in their depth. a deep and powerfully written piece. well done and keep writing

    Charlotte
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