Your fine essence should mingle with mine.
A new entity we would then have combined.
My thoughts being covered by your thoughts.
Giving more meaning to things in our hearts.
Your favorite color, my sharp-toned wiry wit.
We would be sublime, introducing our own skit.
I could freshen up your humor, you'd be dynamite.
You could tone me down a notch, just a tiny touch.
Pour yourself into me; as I pour myself in you.
A dynamite duo, a fabulous pair we'd make too.
A sketch of us in our new and configured state,
drawn by an artist of renown, I'd keep that date.
A contest entry
- Taste of Romance by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
475 points, ended July 23, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nicely written poem
Humor and rhyme and what a great happy image to that date.
Best wishes and thank you for your entry
Julie
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I could freshen up your humor, you'd be dynamite.
You could tone me down a notch, just a tiny touch.
wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contest
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Thank you so much lol
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a good piece of poetry which flows along with a smooth rhythm and stylish rhyme, blue is my fav colour
sparkle me alive pat
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its done...smilelol
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