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It's A Summer Thing

Silent sunshine sparking special snuggled regards.
Soft, sincere snippets of spectacular snapshots
roam the circumference of my mind's inner sanctum.
Simplicity's serenity sizzles intermittently; salvaged.

It's summertime, in the city, round about the world.
Such succulent, sensationalized, sanctioned splendor.
Sceneries of satisfactions; seducing demure sights.
The Sun spreads glad tidings through-out the land.


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Silent, sunshine, sparking, special, snuggled,Soft, sincere snippets,snapshots, simplicity,sizzles.

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  • iamlost gold member
    August 6, 2008

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    Wow, you took the alliteration of the wordbank and ran with it! In a good way. I like the title, how it really ties the whole poem together.
    Well penned.

    ~lost


  • Frogzter gold member
    July 24, 2008

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    I agree, a wonderful take on the word bank bringing it to life with imagery! Thanks for entering and best wishes.

    Frogz~


  • Frozentearz
    July 21, 2008

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    A wonderful take on the summer time word bank full of sunshine, and wonderful wording giving some thick imagery. Thanks for joining in.
    Warm thoughts
    Frozentearz


  • individuality gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry - i am spitting s's in the rian sadly we have had no sunshine here for weeks just rain so that's all i can dio, even though it is summer lol


    • 2lullabyhaven
      July 18, 2008
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      Oh Ian, that is unfortunate for you guys. I say...let the sunshine in lol

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